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manonthepath wrote:If you want me to edit your work or ghost write for you, I charge $75 U.S. per hour. [tongue2]

Lol... I am not sure if this is a compliment or if I'm being made fun of.

Either way, I couldn't afford you. [devil]

Ok... so I've written other stories about these characters, and posted them here. So there might be some familiarity to some people. This is a first draft. i stayed up most of the night writing it. I am not sure how I feel about it. And this is also only half the story. I am not quite sure where to ...

I see that your descriptions are a bit refined now [thumbup] I can say no more but agree with Ušušur that I would like to read the whole thing. You're good writer :) how long have you've been writing? On and off for about 20 years. I became a published author in the early 90s. I had two short stori...

No need to be sorry lol. It's just that it's hard (or for me, impossible) to comment on just part of story without reading the whole thing. It's similar to seeing only small part of a movie. When you post the whole thing I'll be glad to share my thoughts. [thumbup] There are other significant parts...

Ušušur wrote:Is this a short story or is it a part/beginning of a bigger story?

Its part of a longer story. I should have said that in the original post. Sorry.

Hello all, I'm back again. This story brings back some familiar characters. Enjoy, :). And feedback is always welcome. Good or bad. ************************************************************************* "It was a hallucination." Dr. Schmidt said matter of factly, twisting his pen with t...

I would guess along the same lines as your friend. Did you feel any after effects? Drained perhaps as might (theoretically) be expected with an incubus? Did you hit orgasm in your dream? And if you did, did you 'feel' it or did it possibly 'fizzle'? Have you had any other experiences with entities?...

Or it could've just been a random sex dream. Yes, very well could've. I have those all the time, lol. But what made this one different was the feeling. It's hard to explain, something just felt different about the whole thing. It was way more vivid then my other dreams like that. But I also know th...

I would guess along the same lines as your friend. Did you feel any after effects? Drained perhaps as might (theoretically) be expected with an incubus? Did you hit orgasm in your dream? And if you did, did you 'feel' it or did it possibly 'fizzle'? Have you had any other experiences with entities?...

I hope this is the right section for this. I wasn't really sure where to put it. Mods, feel free to move it if appropriate. This was a while ago... probably about 6 years ago. But I was thinking about it earlier and thought I would post about it here. I have only told one person about this encounter...

[pray] [pray] Bravo! This is great! :D You're now ready for the hardest thing to do with writing. Make money. [crazy] You learned so fast [thumbup] I can't describe you the joy I feel [yay] I hope that you've been enjoying the whole process too because I sure did reading it [grin] Thank you so much...

This is a continuation of my last story. I wanted to practice description a little. So tonight in my downtime at work I wrote this. Feedback would be awesome, as always. :) *********************************************************************** The street was quiet tonight. But Renee imagined most s...

Once again, great advice. You really are brilliant. :) My block was over today when I encountered a moth. Its funny how little things like that will do it. Now I havw a few more ideas for scenes. I am thinking about writing more about the suicide attempt. It will be hard to do with such limited medi...

You don't mean to incorporate her story in the main story? I don't know what is your idea, but it could be interesting to see such character involved somehow. It could give you a great pitch. But that's just like, my opinion [crazy] And something tickled my funny as I was reading. And it was a desc...

So, this isn't really part of the last story. It relates, but is not directly tied in I guess. Kimberly has her own separate story and this is where her story crosses paths with the other story. The guy sitting in the waiting room is Anders from the first story. Enjoy, [devil] ******* "So I'll ...

You're good [thumbup] I feel that you got into some kind of trance after the first 3 paragraphs and starting dialogue? :D Thank you, :) And yea, that"s pretty much what happened. I just wanted to make two remarks, besides the comma which also I don't use as it should be used so I'm not the per...

Beautiful. Very vivid imagery.

Hi all, I have been writing a lot lately about several characters I've developed over a long time, and their interactions with one another. I guess you would call this a vignette. It's part of a bigger story, a work in progress. I wanted to practice writing in third person omniscient because it's no...

Is there a link to read more about the details, or can I find it easily just by googling them?

I have some stuff that I have submitted to magazines in the past and been turned down.

A fellow metalhead, musician, and writer! [thumbup] Welcome and enjoy your stay :D Thanks for the welcome, :) What kind of Metal are you into? Mainly progressive nowadays like Symphony X, Opeth, Ayreon, Between the Buried and Me etc. For a long time I was into heavy, power and speed metal and it wa...

hi! I can't help it. I'm sitting here laughing and strolling down memory lane. Have fun with Pan, dude. I hope you let us know how the ride was when it's done. Ah, do tell? If you are comfortable I would love to hear more about your experience with him. If not here then you can PM me. I haven't don...

The symbol you have as an avatar is one I was considering getting tattooed on me last time I was in Norway. But I opted for a Vegvisir instead. [thumbup] Yeh,Ginfaxi suits most for this forum,I think,lol. [grin] I'm not sure what I'll get next,inkwise but Vegvisir is one possibility along with some...

EternalReturn wrote:A fellow metalhead, musician, and writer! [thumbup] Welcome and enjoy your stay

Thanks for the welcome,

What kind of Metal are you into?

manofsands wrote:Well Met & Welcome.

Looking forward to discussions

Thank you,

Hi Valkrane. What sort of occultism do you study? I go through fazes of different things. I've been pretty into Demonology/Demonalatry for a long time though. I've also been really heavy into Gnosticism and Luciferianism in this past. I am also pretty well versed in Laveyan Satanism (something I fi...