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Always & Forever. ~

Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2016 10:13 pm

by Kami

When I look deep into your eyes,
Beyond those diamond windows,
I see a beautiful universe,
The splendor of your soul:

Re: Always & Forever. ~

Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2016 5:17 am

by wileychaote

Awesome. It's beautiful, has a good rhythm, and carries a lot of weight for a short quatrain— definitely a mark of good poetry
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Re: Always & Forever. ~

Posted: Fri Jun 10, 2016 8:55 am

by Kami

Re: Always & Forever. ~

Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2016 8:19 am

by Kami