Pain

[Subzero1]

I sit on a throne of pain it was a mistake to shake the souls of the those who didn't know who I was it was very bold im a 1000 years old Im cold i can't cry tears my hands were fried by who wasn't at my side I don't deny i was a note in history my skin is still blistering from not kneeling to the one who made everything hot as hell I heard the bells ring i hear the screams every night I am the dark knight I only have sight of a lonely soul that isn't mine

[CCoburn]

Pain


I sit on a throne of pain
it was a mistake to shake
the souls of the those
who didn't know who I was

It was very bold
im a 1000 years old
Im cold I can't cry tears
my hands were fried
by who wasn't at my side

I don't deny
I was a note in history
my skin is still blistering
from not kneeling to the one
who made everything
hot as hell

I heard the bells ring
I hear the screams every night
I am the dark knight
I only have sight of a lonely soul
that isn't mine


Comments: a rough restructuring to a typical four stanza piece. I've seen worse on actual writing forums.